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carnival of hate
Contributed by
blackholesun2006
on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 04:00:06 PM in AEST
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silence where there was life before
this broken fairground
has closesed its door
no longer play this carousel
no coconut shy
or wishing well
the colours are a faded black
my rollercoster has lost its track
so take your ticket
use it wise
but you cant come in
keep that disguise
for time of fun
have long since ceased
like blinded eyes
of those deceased
bury me longer
in the casket down
for i'm no longer
your carnival clown
for tears i have
my painted smile gone
and all the things
you would rely on
for this fairground is a place for death
if you enter now
you steal my breath
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blackholesun2006
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2006-08-08 16:00:06]
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Re: carnival of hate
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by RLWildPassions on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 11:54:53 PM AEST
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| this is a sad poem, very much emotion. sorry for the clown... guess I will rip up my ticket.. I don't want to take a clowns breath.. put that closed sign on. |
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Re: carnival of hate
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by falling_shadows_of_terror on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 01:36:11 AM AEST
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| I love your style of writing. Very good. |
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Re: carnival of hate
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by seci on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 01:16:23 PM AEST
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| i couldn't pass tis poem by, because of the title of its name. i really as well like your style of writing. you remind me of this writer on this poem site that you write similer to. i like this poem. |
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Re: carnival of hate
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by CaddishCut on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 06:15:50 PM AEST
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| Very creative. Very powerful. Great write! |
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