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My life
Contributed by
jonteD
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Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 01:54:46 PM in AEST
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My life seems alas such a strain
Everything around gives me pain
No one steps forward to help at all
To most people I seem such a fool
Anyone can end up this way
Low clouds of grey each and every day
How and when did I reach this state?
Even now I remember clear the date
All changed when I took on the role
Leading a life that takes full its toll
Tears from then still with me here
Happened when I became a carer
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2006-08-08 13:54:46]
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Re: My life
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 02:02:33 PM AEST
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TOuching write I hope things improve for you soon. I know these feelings well.
Michelle |
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Re: My life
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by Lionel on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 03:31:33 PM AEST
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| Not bad. Seems true in many people. The first step in the correcting of a problem is the understanding of it's cause. |
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Re: My life
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 03:57:34 PM AEST
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Oh Jon..that's what makes you so special...YOU CARE..... and whoever thinks of you as a fool....well... I won't say more..
Great to see you posting again....
Love and snogs,
Your Little Lady.... |
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Re: My life
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by frmpoison2static on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 07:57:12 PM AEST
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| astounding write...i know what it feels like to feel pain and have everyone around you not understand...keep the good writing up. |
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