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Perfect Tragedy
Contributed by
HeArTbRoKEnGiRl
on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 10:08:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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she lives on her own
her identity unknown
life seem so unfair
why does no one care?
they don't know she's no longer dreaming
but inside she's screaming
she doesn't want help;
she needs it
lock away the pain
put away the fears
you only show the fake smiles
not the hidden tears
she shuts her eyes again
she's trying not to see
trying not to remember
sadly this poem is about me...
i take the knife
cut through my skin...
another day
another sin
Pinch me now i must be dreaming
my heart is dying, soul is screaming
i've lost the ability to feel
suddenly this nightmare has become all too real
Her nightmares had once been pleasant dreams
she used to laugh instead of scream
but her dreams are now nightmares
where screaming is all she does
along with crying tears of blood
she didn't know how to get the pain off her mind
so she left her world of misery and never looked behind
she ran away to try and find herself
not thinking twice about anyone else
soon she realized she shouldn't have left
but knew it was too late to return
so once again she lived in sorrow
and died in a perfect tragedy
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2006-08-07 22:08:23]
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Re: Perfect Tragedy
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by EddieDean on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 10:32:42 PM AEST
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Wow, very tragic indeed. Nice write, I too have had those feelings and thoughts. Life sucks, thats a fact, but we gotta keep on.
Good work.
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Re: Perfect Tragedy
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by lillyjane on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 02:55:33 AM AEST
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| I can relate to your feelings to brilliant poem xx |
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Re: Perfect Tragedy
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by frmpoison2static on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 08:15:15 PM AEST
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| loved it..i could defintley relate to this poem...how when the pain is too much to bear we then become numb..excellent write.. |
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