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Tears
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 07:48:11 AM in AEST
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She was ill for over a year.
She died just like I feared.
I held her hand as she died.
I fell apart and cried.
She gave birth to my offspring.
She used to walk around the house and sing.
But now there is silence and it makes me sad.
I've lost the will to live that I had.
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2006-08-07 07:48:11]
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Re: Tears
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 08:03:37 AM AEST
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| I'm so glad it is fictional. I know how this feels, and you have explained it so well. Short and sweet, but packed with meaning and feeling. Sue x |
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Re: Tears
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 08:55:16 PM AEST
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| is good is fiction.....is very well written......^_^".....keep it up |
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