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September
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
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Saturday, 5th August 2006 @ 09:29:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I saw your hadlights in the window,
my face was pressed against the glass
I waited years for you to return before I learned,
That you were never coming back
Im going to close my eyes before i start to scream
I'm dwelling on things I've never noticed,
you won't save yourself you're never going to save me
I only stumbled once for a moment and it was over,
I think I'll close my eyes before i start to scream
You said todays the day goodbye just won't wait
If you need me to... I'll wait until September.
It's come and gone Novemebers on it's way.
So easy to forget and hard to remember
The way to getting back our self esteem
The lines on your face are getting clearer,
to me you'll always be my family.
they said I wouldnt hold on too much longer
but i'm so much stronger then they ever thought i'd be
I'm going to open up and tell you everything.
No regrets. You've got no one left!
I hope that every step reminds you of the ones that you left.
September was cold and Im still here, I never left!
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MajesticPoet
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Re: September
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 5th August 2006 @ 10:33:12 PM AEST
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I suspect this piece will hit hard for many readers. It did, I must say, for me. For me, it was October............. some twenty five years ago now. And to be perfectly honest - I don't think it was the "leaving" itself that was the hard part (it was time, you know... past time) ---- it was, rather... the "never looking back" that I still, now, cannot understand.
Extremely well done. You should be proud of this piece... it is so painfully real that I feel compelled to applaud you not only for the result but for the strength you've shown in attempting/achieving it.
My best to you -
~Snemmy
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Re: September
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by CaddishCut on
Saturday, 5th August 2006 @ 10:48:27 PM AEST
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| Magnificent! I can hear music playing with this one |
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Re: September
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th August 2006 @ 06:32:50 PM AEST
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I too, (like snem) can relate to this in a terrible way. I don't think I missed the
leaving, or the never looking back until I was an adult and in need. That is the first
time I really realized how much "space" separated us. That you have held on,
(I'm still here, I never left!) is an incredible feat. And a very noble one. I see
a reverent hope in this write as well as such sadness and lingering grief.
I also applaud, not only your effort, but your accomplishment as well. Good luck to you.
~Breezy |
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