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Love's Coffin
Contributed by
Soccerflyer27
on
Saturday, 5th August 2006 @ 05:58:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm all alone,
And full of dread.
I am alive,
But I feel so dead.
Giving love up,
Was a sin,
Now I'm lost inside,
My Love's coffin
It's dark and cold,
Sad and drear.
I'm out of hope
Without you, my dear.
I feel cold pain,
From my head to my toes,
I can't get out,
The door is closed.
I wish you were here,
Next to me,
This is not how I wanted,
Things to be.
I'm full of regret,
Oh so often,
While I'm in,
My Love's Coffin.
All the Love,
I held so close,
All the Love,
I made the most of,
It's all been burned,
Burnt to a crisp.
The ashes, I still hold,
In my fist.
I can't let go,
Can't get away.
Will I be able,
to leave someday?
Leave this misery,
And the tears that come often,
Leave the cold memory of,
My Love's Coffin.
Copyright ©
Soccerflyer27
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2006-08-05 17:58:09]
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Re: Love's Coffin
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by CaddishCut on
Saturday, 5th August 2006 @ 11:31:37 PM AEST
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| This gave me chills and a pit in my stomach. Great work! |
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Re: Love's Coffin
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by wildcherry3393 on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 09:46:33 PM AEST
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| omg! this made me sad, which is good! gosh, loves coffin, that was a really good idea, really high emotion, i wish i could write like you |
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Re: Love's Coffin
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by akakin on
Sunday, 3rd May 2009 @ 07:47:05 PM AEST
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love is so hard to explain PERIOD
well done..
feeling the rhythm... |
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