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kind of an art
Contributed by
priss
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Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 11:59:26 PM in AEST
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teasing me with your bits of affection
you sneak into my heart
-its kind of an art-
the way you work on me.
so i offer all of me, section by section.
painting my curves
stroking my flesh full of nerves,
you re-create me.
i'm a work in progress, no where near perfection.
you've made a landscape of my thighs,
made sunsets of my eyes;
evoking a false depiction of me.
afraid of what you'll see,
you make your corrections-
(paint my heart black)
-its almost an attack-
the way you work on me.
fearing your rejection
i let you make your mold
all my passion i enfold
to become the me that you want.
Copyright ©
priss
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2006-08-04 23:59:26]
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Re: kind of an art
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by Spike on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 07:48:59 PM AEST
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Just Wow, Priss. The reason why I plow through post after post - to strike gold. Instantly seductive, well written, then the U-turn of the last two stanzas, beginning with the abrupt last line of stanza 3. You captured a diverse mix of feelings here. Happy 2007.
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Re: kind of an art
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 06:23:07 PM AEST
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OH gosh , priss .. I'm with spike here. This is brilliant!
(and I have tried to curb that word, having used
it a bit too liberally in the past)
It's so painful .. I feel ya.
And I understand the desire, need and pain.
This was exceptionally well conceived and displayed.
Stunning!
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Re: kind of an art
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by artjunkiekyle on
Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 01:15:56 AM AEST
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your so awesome and i hope you know you no longer need to feel this way, you have me!
-kyle |
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