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the past takes a toll on you
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 11:42:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Surging pain within
each day passes
I am without
a new life emerges
but missing pieces flow through
the veins of my soul
all things of the past have taken their toll
JENNI
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PhantomVampyress
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2006-08-04 11:42:45]
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Re: the past takes a toll on you
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 12:20:32 PM AEST
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Short but very powerful write, Jenn..
and you are so right, the past does take a toll on us.
But writing it out helps us release some of that, no?
A process of sorts ..
Great write.
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Re: the past takes a toll on you
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by shelby on
Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 01:09:02 PM AEST
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Powerful Jen and yes I do relate .
I loved the way you presented this.
Your never alone Im here for ya sis!
Michelle |
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Re: the past takes a toll on you
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by jerseysue on
Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 05:58:55 PM AEST
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| Yes I can relate to this. I also feel like this sometimes. You put it into words very well. Thanks for sharing. Sue xx |
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Re: the past takes a toll on you
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 06:07:53 PM AEST
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Very powerful piece, in such a small package. Wonderful Jen. "all things of the past have taken their toll". So true.
Peace and hugs,
Laurabean |
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Re: the past takes a toll on you
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 12:42:53 PM AEST
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powerful and deep... This was very well expressed... Can relate...
Take care
christina |
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Re: the past takes a toll on you
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by ravensofthedark on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 08:18:38 AM AEST
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nice poem although short it's still good poetry
~The Raven |
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Re: the past takes a toll on you
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by CuriousitysCat on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 07:41:25 PM AEST
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I love this poem, it truely was a deep relation I felt reading it. As much as the past used to bother me to think about [the deep dark parts that few but yourself could ever know of] all the poetry I ever wrote to try and relieve myself of the rawness of the past could never justify it such as this poem does...
;]
~Jazz
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Thanks for putting this piece on here, it was awesome to read. |
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Re: the past takes a toll on you
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by trueecho on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 10:07:32 AM AEST
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yes, youre making me smile again..good write
Mike trueecho |
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