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Invisible
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 11:39:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Every time I speak no one hears my voice
everytime I cry no one see my tears
I hide behind my hair
Does anyone see me there?
Does anyone hear me?
Im right here!
why don't you see me there?
why don't you hear my voice?
I don't have a choice
transparent
no exsistant to anyone
I am so alone yet im right there
screaming in front of all you
you don't hear my voice crying aloud
Im an echo of sounds
a blur in your visions
yet im right here
I've become invisible for so many years
if I were to disappear it wouldn't matter
because to them I am not there
they don't care
they never knew I was ever Here
JENNI
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PhantomVampyress
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2006-08-04 11:39:58]
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Re: Invisible
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by shelby on
Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 01:11:23 PM AEST
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Oh now this is so sad,. I never understood what has happened to the family unit, same goes on with my family, well mmmm what family lol. Im sad for your mom .
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Re: Invisible
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 5th August 2006 @ 09:41:50 AM AEST
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Good write Jen. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura (who hates to hear your Mom is feeling down) |
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Re: Invisible
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 12:44:34 PM AEST
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I can personally relate to this... This was brillant... well written and I liked this a lot.
Take care
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Re: Invisible
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by ravensofthedark on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 12:59:34 PM AEST
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if that's how you feel, i'm feeling the same way, all the time
~The Raven |
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Re: Invisible
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:43:16 AM AEST
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I though i'd read some more of your poetry today, i'm glad i read this one, as for being invisible? you nailed it and it's more prevalant than you think, for all kinds of reasons, and no one is exzempted especially in this day and age. A most essential peice of writting. well done.
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Re: Invisible
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by trueecho on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 12:46:44 PM AEST
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youre definately "here" to me Jenni
another good write
Mike
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Re: Invisible
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 12:14:51 PM AEST
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| Sometimes being invisible allows you to see the deeper reality of what you are looking at.People able to cause pain with no remorse. Sad...Thanks for sharing |
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