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My Love
Contributed by
Smartie
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Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 08:53:29 AM in AEST
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SecretLove
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It's an age old saying -
We all want what we can't have.
Well, you're all I want,
You're what I think about,
And what I talk about.
You've shown me -
That everything isn't just skin deep.
People aren't just a pretty face,
That size doesn't matter,
And that love does exist.
Copyright ©
Smartie
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2006-08-03 08:53:29]
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Re: My Love
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by midian on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 09:17:55 AM AEST
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Thankyou for your comment. this poem is lovely, i can relate to "We all want what we can't have. Well, your all I want,"
I think your poem is emotional and very well put across.. keep writing
Carly |
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Re: My Love
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by Smartie on
Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 08:26:56 PM AEST
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| thanks for the comment!! |
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Re: My Love
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by Drapes on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 03:05:46 PM AEST
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| Aw cute! Great job, I'm sure so many know how you feel! |
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