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Untitled on purpose
Contributed by
midian
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Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 06:48:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Time has passed,
Things have changed.
Although it seems we still remain.
It is only our memories,
That keep us close. &
Keep us clinging on onto new hopes.
Close to our future,
Close to our past,
Never close to our lives
Because they pass too fast
Think back a long way,
Was it really that long?
since you were naked unprotected
and so vunerable to harm,
20 years have i now lived.
in the same damn place
with the same damn *****
Surely Time for a change,
because everythings changing
How unfortunate it is
that we are remaining
the end they say is only the beginning
the begining is only the end
so on to the end for the begining of my life
and back to the begining for the begining of the end.
Copyright ©
midian
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2006-08-03 06:48:46]
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Re: Untitled on purpose
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by Smartie on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 09:05:05 AM AEST
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| not bad for not writing in a year, keep up the good work. |
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Re: Untitled on purpose
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by Lilbabe on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 10:31:28 AM AEST
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i liked this....very nice. it reminds me of a poem i wrote, but i havent posted it...yet.
great work, though. |
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Re: Untitled on purpose
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 07:57:31 AM AEST
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What a magnificent peice of writting, I was realy touched by this and can relate quite well with your sentiments. beautiful peice of work.
Ben |
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Re: Untitled on purpose
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 03:00:37 PM AEST
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Wow .. gripping write! And full of so many meanings
to ponder .. I especially liked the last two lines. To
say they are immensely profound would be a gross
understatement.
Glad to see you got over the "block" *smiles*
~Breezy |
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