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She...

Contributed by Alexs_baby_girl on Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 05:51:51 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

She saw her reflection
In the waters edge
She knew what she was
Going to do but not why

She questioned herself
What had happened that day
The day that you left her for
Some beauiful girl

She knew you knew she
Cared
But you really couldn't
Care less

She wasn't pretty
Or skinny or anywhere
Near as talented but before she
Showed up you life was nothing!

Now as she sits and looks at
The moon she knows why
But she ponders what to do next
She just can't handle the pain!

She put up with it for a while
But then after that she broke
"If I can't be with him...."She said
"I'd rather die!"

Though shes just giving up
She knows thats all shes good at
Just give up dear
Don't worry it'll be fine!

She picks up her knife and
With one swift move shes gone
But you wanna know a secret
That girl....Is me!

Copyright © Alexs_baby_girl ... [ 2006-08-03 05:51:51]
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Re: She... (User Rating: 1 )
by Smartie on Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 09:08:59 AM AEST
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oh wow, that was an amazing ending to such a wonderful poem, keep writing.

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