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Coresponding Puzzle Pieces

Contributed by The_Unknown on Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 03:45:43 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I think its god
that makes us like
coresponding puzzle pieces
perfectly aligned
its thaughts like this
that helps me survive
while we're apart

while I'm with you
up on a cloud
all I can do is smile
they will see us waving
and tell us to come down
but we won't

with your white wings
and our magic cloud
we rise above all

when I'm with you
I can't help but smile
with gods speed
we race across
the heavens
all of our problems are
starting to bleed out
I'm lookin in on the good life

I think its god
that makes us like
coresponding puzzle pieces
perfectly aligned
its thaughts like this
that helps me survive
while we're apart

I might be doomed never to find
without a trust of flamming fields
am I too dumb to refine?
if you took to me like this
I'd be dancing like the ice queen
the rest of our lifes
would've been well

from a field of golden dreams
I lie down
and dream of you and me
I'm still in a million pieces
I still hear the ringing of your laughter
I see the love in your smile

even if I live to be a hundred
and two
without you
I would never be as happy
as up on that cloud

I think its god
that makes us like
coresponding puzzle pieces
perfectly aligned
its thaughts like this
that helps me survive
while we're apart




Copyright © The_Unknown ... [ 2006-08-03 03:45:43]
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Re: Coresponding Puzzle Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 03:57:24 AM AEST
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I aree we are all part of a puzzle, brilliant poem .. xxx


Life has many things we do not understand,
we are all part of a very special plan,
as we dash around, in the hustle and the bustle,
we all fit together like a huge jigsaw puzzle,
each one of us is a very special token,
everyone of us is needed,
or the jigsaw would be broken..


Re: Coresponding Puzzle Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by musicXisXlife on Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 06:48:03 AM AEST
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i like this...it makes me happy

like the mental image


:D


teehee




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