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dirty streets
Contributed by
twick
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Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 10:28:57 PM in AEST
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oops
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in the mutinous glow
of amber neon lights
I sit on the edge of a street corner
alone and lonely.
life has to be more
than impromtu scams
and faceless friends.
taking another pull
off the bottle sitting in a
little brown sack,
I think of things I never really did
as the night replays in my head.
where does it all end, friend?
How these streets are dirty.
Copyright ©
twick
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2006-08-02 22:28:57]
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Re: dirty streets
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by midian on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 08:27:11 AM AEST
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Dirty streets indeed
it seems we see more and more the filth that crowds around the streets getting worse and worse, it disheartens me to see it but a wonderfull poem |
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Re: dirty streets
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 12:12:21 PM AEST
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Very expressive, and it holds so true to many people. The imagery is wonderful, and your wording is perfect.
Very nice write,
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Re: dirty streets
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by trulovaAKAthetruth on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 02:34:27 AM AEST
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yes twick the streets of this world are dirty
nice poem t=luv |
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