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Behind The Black Door

Contributed by The_Unknown on Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 10:12:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



In this crowded place
I see you
Making your way
To the door
Your the one of my dreams
Running towards you
You open the black door
I slam it shut
And say
Come with me
And take you
To the front door
You say no
I must go back

When you entered the black door
I saw a glimpse of what lies ahead
I tried
I tried to bring you back

You don't deserve to go through the black door
You should have atleassed
Tried to open the white one

With my never ending tears
I take the knife
And carve my tears into my skin
I need you
I don't care
Where you go
I'll be there

With my slow death
I find the crowded place once again
And see the black door

I need you
I don't care
Where you go
I'll be there

So I enter the black door
I enter my doom
I see you in the far off distance
Running towards your silhouette
You disappear
Franticly looking
I see your face through the fog
When I try and come near
You disappear

Alone in this place
I cry
I feel you near
Yet I cannot find you
I feel your warmth
I hear your whispers
I will never give up
In this horrid place
Ill never give up
The search for you




Copyright © The_Unknown ... [ 2006-08-02 22:12:53]
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Re: Behind The Black Door (User Rating: 1 )
by chaos78 on Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 10:33:43 PM AEST
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good write thank you for sharing


Re: Behind The Black Door (User Rating: 1 )
by Uncertain_Oblivion on Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:24:53 PM AEST
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Killer poem. I loved it! *applaudes*




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