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I love our lovely way of dying...
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 10:13:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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on a floor
shards of window
i broke my heart against her hate
in a room
with only chairs
i fold my hands 'til it's too late
Now i'm shaking in the clouds
with our hands held, we sought the sounds
of memories melting in the mind
i love our lovely way of dying...
in a mirror
empty eyes
lines of white help poison "free"
on a flower
tears can lie
and that's become the voice in me
Now she's on the edge of love
falling down seen not above
spread your wings my dearest fate
let your claws grip what you hate...
i'm still here
candle's glow
cut and paste within the rains
she can see
but never knows
that i can't taste beyond my veins
dw
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Re: I love our lovely way of dying...
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by Ruby2sdy on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 02:05:19 PM AEST
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a very good write, really visual some gorgeous use of language and imagery, and such a poignant message, thank you for sharing,
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Re: I love our lovely way of dying...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 05:57:09 PM AEST
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Omigod .. this was exceptionally written! I hope this is
not ill-fitted of me to say, but man, this was an incredible
read.. [and I loved it]. Even though the topic is controversial,
the piece itselt, stands unaffected and proverbial.
That last line is sooooooo impossibly IMMENSE!!
Excellent post. Very well done!
~Breezy |
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Re: I love our lovely way of dying...
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by GurlyTye on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 06:19:37 PM AEST
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| this one hit me in an interesting spot. it's funny sometime how you can take another persons work and relate it directly to what you are going through at that moment in your life. i really liked this.. |
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Re: I love our lovely way of dying...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 06:44:34 PM AEST
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Dwayne~
A thought provoking and outstanding write. Your poetry provokes every bit of ones mind. You are a skilled poet who can convey his thoughts well through the magic of his pen. I so much enjoy reading your work my dear friend. Dynamic, smashing and sensational.
Keep up the awesome writing.
Wishing you the very best always DW~
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: I love our lovely way of dying...
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by The_Unknown on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 02:58:01 AM AEST
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that is such a great write!!! I can relate.
the wording was beautiful.
the whole poem is beautiful!
kind of weird, I just got a strange feeling from this poem... I don't know if its good or bad. but yea...
good job!
luvs ya!
~*Jess*~ |
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Re: I love our lovely way of dying...
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 04:40:03 AM AEST
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| I agree with everything said its brilliant, you are very talented. xxx |
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Re: I love our lovely way of dying...
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by brew on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 09:07:05 PM AEST
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So true, and felt what was posted through the flowing of words.......Strong, yet right where it should be.! You have a strong talent for given the reader what is right there......Extradinary write.
Brew~ |
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Re: I love our lovely way of dying...
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 12:03:51 AM AEST
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Im always awed at your poetry and form of writing. You never cease to amaze and I continue to be a loyal fan!
ALINA |
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Re: I love our lovely way of dying...
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by allforyou on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 09:45:15 AM AEST
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i think its sad.
good write. |
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