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Undecided
Contributed by
xlguesswho14xx
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Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 04:20:00 AM in AEST
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Undecided is what I have come to be
Where the fog of cloudiness lingers, unwavering in its power
Above my bleak confused presence
Wondering, wondering which choice is right
Making me doubt everything I've ever known or loved
But still I must find a hole out of this gray unknown
Nothing but overgrown trees and broken down homes
Recover from my comatose state, of what I have become to be
A mere soul, lost among all the tortured and the pained
Searching for a single clue, anything
That will let me chose the right turn to head down
So I can surmount over these complications to triumph in victory
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Re: Undecided
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 09:55:45 AM AEST
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| wow...this is great...put me in a kind of far away nothingness................ |
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Re: Undecided
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 04:01:35 PM AEST
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Tragic,Hopeless,not a nice place to be
i didn't like it a bit
but I wasn't suppose to
so that proves it is a very good write |
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