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To The One I Loved
Contributed by
englishprincej
on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 11:55:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I made you laugh,
I made you cry,
I made you smile,
I made you sad,
I tried to make you happy.
I gave you everything,
I received little in return.
I asked for more,
I got less.
Plans and promises were made but never kept,
Only you know why.
I still love you.
Do you love me ?
I would have said yes, but now.......
If you want me, simply call.
If not, thanks
Thanks, for breaking my heart.
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englishprincej
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2006-08-01 11:55:11]
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Re: To The One I Loved
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 10:20:23 AM AEST
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honest and from the heart.. what more can anyone
ask from this poem. Keep it up! |
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Re: To The One I Loved
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by brew on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 09:29:31 PM AEST
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Something said about this write.....They call.and you say you love them...Is that a question, or answer?!?!?!
I beleive you speak the truth, yet... alil hiding, amongst words. GO forward, and straight...Tell them the WHOLE and nothing more. It has been written you love......Now tell them. Sad, yet beautiful...because it laid words of inner right in line.
Brew~ |
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