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In the somber night
Contributed by
Perfectly_flawed
on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 04:47:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In the somber night,
lay two vacant eyes
that wail to be seen
by the piercing light.
In the somber night,
there are two anxious hands,
that long to be held,
and not fight.
In the somber night,
rests a little girl inside,
that doesnt know,
if she'll be alright.
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2006-08-01 04:47:46]
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Re: In the somber night
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by shady1503 on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 06:01:19 AM AEST
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| I really like this poem, really good expressions and a good ending. Well done :D |
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Re: In the somber night
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by Shmokin on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 07:27:21 AM AEST
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| excellent imagery, well expressed fear, Well done thanx for sharin :-) |
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