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Love Me
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 02:40:34 AM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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Take my emotions, and nurture them sweet,
Give me your heart, say it is mine to keep,
Hold me close, in your loving embrace,
Cast away my sadness,till there is no trace,
Bring forth your passion, do not me deny,
For the beauty of you, brings a tear to my eye,
Make real my dreams, till the pure light of day,
Shield me from harm, chase the nightmares away,
Quench my thirst, with a long loving kiss,
Make my heart pound, with heavenly bliss,
Feel my need, and respond to my touch,
Speak softly to me, I love you so much,
Take my body,my mind and my soul,
Fill me with desire , make me whole,
My heart is yours forever more,
You are the one that I adore.
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jerseysue
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2006-08-01 02:40:34]
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Re: Love Me
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by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 02:57:49 AM AEST
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very honest and passionate! another good one sue, your writes never let down!
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Re: Love Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 03:05:57 AM AEST
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Wow, Sue, this one gave me an adrenaline rush!!!! It's made of wonderful dreams, subtle passionate sensuality, and, and, I don't know the and. It just seems that it is what dreams are made of. The ones we want to come true. Awesome. Simply awesome.
Tim
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Re: Love Me
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 03:19:07 AM AEST
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Well Sue, what can I say. You have surely found “Love” that has captured your heart and has taken you on a new journey in life. This is such a beautiful and passionate written poem. Many blessings to you and may your heart be filled with all the wonders of that love.
Sadaddy
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Re: Love Me
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by lillyjane on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 04:13:19 AM AEST
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| That beautiful Sue you dont have to try it all comes natural to you..Another brilliant poem. xxx |
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Re: Love Me
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by DrogedaRain on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 06:18:26 AM AEST
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| Beautiful imagery.. Wonderful~! |
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Re: Love Me
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by Gentlemanpoet on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 07:16:48 AM AEST
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I really liked this poem, keep it up fair lady.
I pray for thee love. |
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Re: Love Me
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by Shmokin on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 07:35:45 AM AEST
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| Nice write, captures the reader well done thanx for sharin :-) |
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Re: Love Me
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by Craze on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 01:24:30 PM AEST
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| good work its just not my thing but it was a good effort |
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Re: Love Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 05:29:41 PM AEST
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I pray this is a recent inspiration, for the words truly sang from your heart magnificently. Makes for a magnificent write and wonderful potential for happiness. Five from me!
wabl
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Re: Love Me
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by rockstarr12747 on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 07:35:52 PM AEST
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hey sue this is a great and sweet poem my boyfriend says its touching and will work on any man...
~crystal~ |
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Re: Love Me
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 08:02:12 PM AEST
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Sue...
You have a natural ability of being able to express what u feel deep inside. This write is what true love is all about. It's great to see you writing like this dearest Sue~ I hope to be seeing more of these writes from u.
Wishing you the best of luck *wink* you deserve it my dear friend.
love n hugs,
suzie Q |
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