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Between Scary and Damaged
Contributed by
Lilly-Quill
on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 11:11:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Real life comes with scars and walls of defence.
Committing to an open-door relationship gets tense.
Neath covered books of scary or damaged, there’s real.
Many good homes have unbearable memories, surreal.
Best of certainties are sand-houses for winds of doubt.
Harbouring fear percolates damage for a ghost of gout.
Some lose their temper in a moment, thinking all is well.
Harm from such an explosion can be a hydrogen bomb of hell.
Attitudes and manners go far at the end of the worst day.
Major emphasis is on impressions not valued content; hey.
Few take the time to empathize for another‘s difficult walk.
Apathy and neglect do more damage than second-hand talk.
We parrot mindsets, with hypocrisy, devaluing a gift present.
Psychologically damaged; perhaps~, but objectively who isn’t?
A viable insurance for healing is “Jesus Christ Mutual life.”
Yet an open heart-door descends before the real of valued rife.
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Lilly-Quill
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2006-07-31 23:11:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Between Scary and Damaged
(User Rating: 1 ) by JordonsBaby17 on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 11:48:24 PM AEST (User
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well written |
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Re: Between Scary and Damaged
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 06:51:44 PM AEST (User
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Very well written,and a very nice read..
God Bless! |
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Re: Between Scary and Damaged
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 12:59:28 AM AEST (User
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This has to be one of my favorite poems on the site!!! |
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