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It Is Done
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 10:27:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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It is done
They are gone
I must move on
I could cry
I could laugh
Truth is, I have
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I could attempt to point a finger
Try my best to place the blame
Tell me then, what would it matter
This will still remain the same
I could easily speak in anger
Or fall deep into despair
I could wallow in self pity
Feed frustration to the air
While to some it seems expected
I expect it not of me
For it truly serves no purpose
It fulfills no useful need
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I could brood
I could scream
What would it mean
It is done
They are gone
I must move on
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Nazmythian
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2006-07-31 22:27:52]
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Re: It Is Done
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 10:47:30 PM AEST
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I can't even begin to imagine what you must be going through. I do, however, know this, I have a great respect for you.
This poem though? Flawlessly superb!!!
As one of my best friends would say, make sure you take care of you.
Really, take care of yourself.
Tim
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Re: It Is Done
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by sohangme on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 12:06:33 AM AEST
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| very well done...good job |
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Re: It Is Done
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by lillyjane on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 04:28:31 AM AEST
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| A really good poem of how you must feel, I dont know what happened but hope your ok now. xxx |
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Re: It Is Done
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 03:54:24 PM AEST
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A flawless poem of deep emotion and thought. I admire your strength, in times of pain and turmoil it is very easy to fall into a dark place. You havent done this. You have kept a sense of humor and a strong sense of being thoughout this time. I do understand these feeling more than you would realise.
Huge hugs
Michelle
PS taking baby steps leads to taking on the mountain and reaching the top my friend! |
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Re: It Is Done
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 07:44:08 PM AEST
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A great take on your recent trauma and reconciling the loss, stretched into a poem for a wider bereavment.
Spike |
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Re: It Is Done
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 02:48:30 PM AEST
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Scott ..
*falls into a momentary silence*
I'm so sorry I missed this one .. I am awe-struck. Not just
by your talent but the audacity and fortitude you possess with
which to display your "gift". I cannot begin to understand the
dynamics of your last few weeks or the process by which
you are getting through them .. but I can tell you this .. I both
admire and respect you immensely.
Love and strength to you, hun.
~Breezy
(always here for you when needed ..) |
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