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If Tomorrow Never Came
Contributed by
Smartie
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Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 09:42:38 PM in AEST
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If I died tomorrow, what would you do?
Would you cry?
Would you die?
Or just get on with your life?
If I died tomorrow, what would you say?
Would you never speak again?
Would you never talk about me again?
Or just get over me?
If I died tomorrow, how would you act?
Would you commit Sucide?
Would you died of a broken heart?
Or would you just move on?
If tomorrow I lived, would you do the same things?
Would you miss me if I left?
Would you kiss me good-bye?
Or just ingore me like you did today?
Copyright ©
Smartie
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Re: If Tomorrow Never Came
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by JordonsBaby17 on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 11:55:22 PM AEST
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| i really like this poem. its all the questions that people want to know. its very well written |
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Re: If Tomorrow Never Came
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by sohangme on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 12:11:07 AM AEST
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| good ending to such a nice poem |
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Re: If Tomorrow Never Came
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by Smartie on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 09:01:34 AM AEST
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thanks guys, it means a lot that people like my poems!
Smartie |
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Re: If Tomorrow Never Came
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by Lilbabe on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 10:01:06 PM AEST
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wow...i really liked that.
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Re: If Tomorrow Never Came
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 09:16:27 PM AEST
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| is awesome......I loved it......^_^" |
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Re: If Tomorrow Never Came
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by CaddishCut on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 03:49:26 AM AEST
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| *tear* greatly felt |
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Re: If Tomorrow Never Came
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by midian on
Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 05:36:12 AM AEST
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| so powerfull... lovely |
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Re: If Tomorrow Never Came
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by Smartie on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 06:21:40 PM AEST
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hey, thanks guys
Smartie |
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Re: If Tomorrow Never Came
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by ivybabe on
Wednesday, 14th April 2010 @ 11:34:25 PM AEST
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| i loved it i started to cry |
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