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Promises
Contributed by
Mandiebabe7
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Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 07:19:50 PM in AEST
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You promised me forever,
but now all I do is remember.
You promised that what we had was different,
but it ended like all the others.
You promised me a happy life,
but all I got was a "see ya".
You promised me that you loved me,
but all I have is a broken heart.
You promised me that I was the only one for you,
but now all I see is you lookin at her.
You promised me so many things,
but I know now promises were ment to be broken.
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Mandiebabe7
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2006-07-31 19:19:50]
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Re: Promises
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by lostindesire on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 09:03:10 PM AEST
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| very good!! excpecially for your first. keep up the writing. |
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Re: Promises
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by rockstarr12747 on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 07:44:16 PM AEST
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this was a great poem for a first better than my first... and very true.....keep up the good work
~crystal~ |
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