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This Ache
Contributed by
shaydie_lady
on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 02:56:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Wind whips around me,
But I don’t feel it.
Rain falls beside me,
But I don’t see it.
Snow billows from the sky,
But I’m not cold.
Sun beats my face,
But I don’t sweat.
I cannot feel,
I cannot taste
Anything.
Anything but,
This ache inside me.
I do not see,
I do not smell,
Anything.
Anything but,
This hole inside me.
I wish to see
the green grass grow.
To laugh and smile
Like I used to.
But I do not smile,
I do not cry.
I do nothing,
Nothing but,
Try to block this hole inside me.
Try to hide the ache
That is slowly killing the will to laugh
To hug and smile,
Slowly, ever so slowly,
I die inside.
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shaydie_lady
... [
2006-07-31 14:56:18]
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Re: This Ache
(User Rating: 1 )
by sam16 on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 03:57:32 PM AEST
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| wow this is a really good poem...really moving. u can really feel the emotion. well done |
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Re: This Ache
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by lostindesire on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 05:58:23 PM AEST
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| i can really relate to this. you took a feeling i am so familair with and described it in a way i never could. beautiful!!!! |
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