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Your Eyes
Contributed by
zeppchic420
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Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 07:30:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Big blue eyes, ease my aching
Falter,falter
here comes the rain
I'm soaking wet with pain
Lost the battle, lost the war
mourn, mourn
Wintery fires mark the night
I'm overcome with fright
Big blue eyes comfort me
Kiss, kiss
The delusion of truth:
I'm falling into you
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2002-07-28 07:30:24]
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Re: Your Eyes
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 04:35:42 PM AEST
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I really like this..very well written. I'm sorry I haven't come across your writing before now.
Chrissie |
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Re: Your Eyes
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by Firefly on
Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 05:16:59 AM AEST
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| A+ !!! very well done! |
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