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Our World
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 02:23:31 AM in AEST
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Some people say the world is cruel,
who ever thinks this is a fool,
the world does not want us to cry,
the world does not want us to die,
The world does not want war and pain.
its up to mankind the world to regain,
God gave us this world to live in peace,
so only do good, then good vibes your release,
when the world began it was a garden of Eden,
Man is destoying it . man is the reason,
I can almost hear the world sighing,
sometimes I think God must be crying,
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lillyjane
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2006-07-31 02:23:31]
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Re: Our World
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by Ruby2sdy on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 06:32:54 AM AEST
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| so true, we kill each other, we kill the animals, the plants, it seems that we destroy anything that's any good... inspired write, lilyjane, 2sdyx |
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Re: Our World
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 03:54:00 PM AEST
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| Yes the world has been corrupted by mans greed and ignorance. One day we all might realise. Fantastic poem, with good meaning and intentions. It makes you think. Sue x |
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Re: Our World
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by Manda2 on
Sunday, 6th August 2006 @ 06:14:38 PM AEST
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| A brilliant little gem here lillyjane. It will be man who will have to put it all back together again, whatever mess we make it will be us who have to clear it up! Your right, it's not the world that's bad and that's why we will never be able to destroy it we are just destroying ourselves. The world will be here forever, just hope that man will always be able to live on it! |
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