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Baying at the Moon
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
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while little innocent ravens cry
and look above to burning skies
will their tears even be heard?
those scared and fearful little birds?
the hounds of war are baying at the moon
will venus goddess of love watch over us all soon?
will gods protect our human foolishness and dead?
or has theophagy come and showed its ugly head?
while little innocent ravens cry
and look above to burning skies
will their tears even be heard?
those scared and fearful little birds?
still but fledglings..
songs yet to be sung.
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Re: Baying at the Moon
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 01:47:59 AM AEST
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| This is like a flash of lightening..so much to think over..so many tears are there for the ears which can hear the pathetic cries when the nature is foreboding.... venkat |
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Re: Baying at the Moon
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 02:15:41 AM AEST
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| yet again, very good write...always good to hear your words. |
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Re: Baying at the Moon
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 06:46:29 AM AEST
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| beautifully written,,,thankyou ladyfawn,,for another great one,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: Baying at the Moon
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 10:13:59 AM AEST
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| Very true,well written message here! Great peice,Christina |
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Re: Baying at the Moon
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 08:52:44 PM AEST
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| Beautiful Nessa, (sprinkle ..... sprinkle ..... sprinkle) I guess it worked, |
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Re: Baying at the Moon
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 12:02:47 PM AEST
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Ladyfawn,
You are way out of my league. Most of the time I just write funny little rhymes, you write poetry |
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Re: Baying at the Moon
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 01:59:04 PM AEST
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| beautiful and poignent... very intense... |
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Re: Baying at the Moon
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by Tanna on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 01:55:25 AM AEST
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| Amazing write Nessa! Gives people much to think about. |
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Re: Baying at the Moon
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 04:48:36 PM AEST
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| loves ya babe and the poetry that y'are |
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Re: Baying at the Moon
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by sunflower on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 06:46:21 AM AEST
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| thoughful and insightful, birds hearing the cries of war from the perch they sit atop |
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Re: Baying at the Moon
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 11:52:20 PM AEST
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| actually the birds in my poem represent children.... ty i'm glad for your view:) huggs nessa |
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Re: Baying at the Moon
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by vegastar on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 01:55:06 AM AEST
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ladyfawn,
I like your style, also I share your concern. |
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Re: Baying at the Moon
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 02:56:58 PM AEST
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As the birds sadness cries through the winds of change, it makes us sit back and think.
Your words made me come up with this little caption,very inspiring,
Beautifully written. |
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