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The Devil 'n' Miss Bathory
Contributed by
doug
on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 07:36:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The village below
a sweet breeze of flesh
heart tearing lust
October's cold breath
hell prowls the mountain
bloodlust to feed
a carriage , a countess
and victims to bleed
the devil he cackles
the night swallowed black
bellowing downward
he lets the whip crack
the horses hot breath
'tis their wildest fear
bleed the damned peasants
who wander to near
her beauty alluring
then slash , slash
throat blood is squirting
you thrash , she laughs
your blind eyes screaming
unheard your forgotten
a castle's decor
of bled bodies rotten
strip naked pleasure
obscene growling love
wet curves are dripping
with your running blood
washing her clean
the devil is howling
laughter of maddness
bestial and smiling...
the familiars pur
sentinels in hellish fur
Erszebet moans
with the delight
of your orgasmic blood
Copyright ©
doug
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2006-07-30 19:36:06]
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Re: The Devil 'n' Miss Bathory
(User Rating: 1 )
by True on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 08:38:28 PM AEST
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| As I've said I find vampires alluring in an odd way. Excellent write, with all the sensual beastlyness befitting vampires. |
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Re: The Devil 'n' Miss Bathory
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 07:08:45 PM AEST
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Well holy heck doug!!!!! Good grief! lol
I love these dark writes [probably 'cause I have trouble
writing them myself! ] This piece seemed to consume me
as I read .. and my pace quickened as I carried on to
the breathless finale .. phew
bravo! This was an awesome read!
~Breezy |
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Re: The Devil 'n' Miss Bathory
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 12:47:51 AM AEST
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I must say i am very impress with this write.
I truely love this :) |
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Re: The Devil 'n' Miss Bathory
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by secretwind on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 09:16:16 AM AEST
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deep dark and lovely
well done |
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Re: The Devil 'n' Miss Bathory
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 01:07:08 PM AEST
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This is so....bad _ _ _!
Bathory is my very favorite bedtime story....*smiles*
Your talent is wonderful, almost godlike. |
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Re: The Devil 'n' Miss Bathory
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 01:09:27 PM AEST
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| You may like Cradle of Filth? *smiles* |
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