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17 Titles Later and Still 1 State of Mind

Contributed by deadclown on Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 06:03:15 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Free me of my untruths
or else I might just die
Can't end this lonely journey
'til I find peace of mind

I live in fractured solace
whilst shadows steal my breath
My life has turned against me
since the night I welcomed death

My naive fascination
has brought me to my end
That twisted inside rape
was in memory of my friends

Your true love mastication
answered questions of my sleep
The hunger starved my nightmares
but my dreams you tried to eat

My thoughts are now distorted
place my brain in a jar
Recreational angst is hidden
but I'm not quite sure how far

The mutilation of your pity
became mine to hurt your pride
I'm forever in my darkness
End me now. Please let me die

This request of a killer
is for me to take the blame
Those pleas I tried to ignore
but you asked me so I came

I've tried to see a rainbow
but your colours took mine away
I'm drained by all your questions
Now it's time to fade away

Copyright © deadclown ... [ 2006-07-30 18:03:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: 17 Titles Later and Still 1 State of Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 09:24:04 PM AEST
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i actaully got this, and it made a lot of sense to me. good write. keep it up.

xxx

~kei

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