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A Few Words of Wisdom
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 06:29:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Love is but a glorious thing,
And hate a barrier doth make,
To err is human, to forgive divine,
Its just a case of give and take,
Inspiration will lead us on our way,
Adversity stops us in our tracks,
Motivation keeps us moving on,
When all the world seems black,
Confusion can make us lose our minds,
Positivity can clear the doubt,
Happiness can bring us laughter and smiles,
But anger and hate make us shout
We stand up for what we think is right,
And forgive those who cause us harm,
For success is just failure turned inside out,
Its true frienship that will keeps us warm,
So here are my words of wisdom,
Of how to live life to the full,
Be friendly , stead fast and willing,
A good life does not have to be dull.
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Re: A Few Words of Wisdom
(User Rating: 1 ) by True on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 08:27:07 PM AEST (User
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Excellent poem, you have some very good advice in this poem and it flows well. |
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Re: A Few Words of Wisdom
(User Rating: 1 ) by fielding88 on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 11:03:23 PM AEST (User
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Good advice wrapped up in a nicely flowing poem. I enjoyed it. |
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Re: A Few Words of Wisdom
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 12:23:11 AM AEST (User
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Very good writing my friend.
These little words of wisdom are full and they pretty much size up things.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: A Few Words of Wisdom
(User Rating: 1 ) by lillyjane on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 04:35:47 AM AEST (User
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Good words of wisdom Sue, another inspirational poem by you and another brilliant one. xxx |
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Re: A Few Words of Wisdom
(User Rating: 1 ) by dougnut on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 06:18:48 AM AEST (User
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Great words of truth and wisdom once again portrayed in your work Sue.
great read and so well written and expressed
Thanks for sharing this INSPIRATIONAL.
God Bless You
Hug from Doug |
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Re: A Few Words of Wisdom
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 03:42:10 PM AEST (User
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You truly are wise and your wisdom shines throughout this excellent poem.
I especially love this line:
"For success is just failure turned inside out"
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