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Her Passion
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Lone_er
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Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 11:42:14 AM in AEST
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Her Passion
She's so calm and collected
Heart under control it seems
Aww but I see her different
In her heart passion teems
She sits there so cool
No discontent will you see
But down deep inside
Her heart longs to free
Free to escape reality
Explore the extra mile
Touch the essence of fantasy
If only a little while
Aww but it gets complicated
Like finding another to understand
Even the simplest sharing of these thoughts
So many would never understand
But to satisfy her own heart
Her dreams must be shared
So many would be hurt
If she ever dared
Yet passion slowly moves her
Toward the inevitable dawning of the day
When she will at last succumb
Fling caution away
Then shall passion erupt
As a volcano in the night
Pent up emotions overflowing
Propelling her toward the light
The light of hidden dreams
Of courage to explore
Toward the light of her hope
"There must be something more!"
Russ
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Re: Her Passion
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 12:56:46 PM AEST
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"But to satisfy her own heart
Her dreams must be shared
So many would be hurt
If she ever dared"
How closely this has hit home...
I have to agree.."There MUST be something more!!"
Lovely write..Russ...
Jenni
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Re: Her Passion
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by shelby on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 01:29:47 PM AEST
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Russ a delightful flowing read from start to finish this is beautiful.
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Re: Her Passion
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by jerseysue on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 01:31:54 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this poem. I can relate to rhis , Like you wouldn't believe. HA ha Can you read my mind? Your words are wonderful, thanks for sharing them. Sue x |
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Re: Her Passion
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 04:45:07 AM AEST
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| I can also relate to this a great deal. lovely poem, xxx |
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Re: Her Passion
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by MsCrys on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 11:45:06 PM AEST
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| Is this poem about me?! This one made me tear up rather quickly. Love it, love it, love it. It's so perfectly written. It is the best thing I have read on here so far. Amazing work, Russ. :) |
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