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death
Contributed by
jono
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Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 08:51:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Death is were the angels sing
and life solemly ends
to end life with your family
and all your loving friends
and never to be seen again
and never to be heard
and never to be loved again
but no anger,pain and fear
life will end for all
but we never are ready
wethere you live to the full
or keep life going steady
Copyright ©
jono
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2006-07-29 08:51:11]
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Re: death
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by shelby on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 01:33:58 PM AEST
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a great concept you showed in this write. Nicely done. Yes each day is a gift we must live it to the fullest. One doesnt realise it until someone is suddenly taken away.
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Re: death
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by jerseysue on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 02:07:46 PM AEST
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| Yes death is the final sting, but those who leave us stay in our hearts. Nice write. Sue x |
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Re: death
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by kirankaur on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 08:22:07 PM AEST
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i different insight to death, it's helped me come to terms with the realisation of death...a well written piece.
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