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Our Love
Contributed by
lost_in_the_darkness09
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Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 08:03:28 PM in AEST
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They say that true love is hard to find,
I proved the odds wrong and made you mine.
Our love is living proof,
That a dream can become the truth.
We fought everything that stood in our way,
And are still together utnil this day.
Even thought they thought we wouldn't endure,
Our love showed us through and proved to be pure.
I wanna be with you until the end of our days,
Right here, loving you always.
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lost_in_the_darkness09
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2006-07-28 20:03:28]
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Re: Our Love
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 08:48:40 PM AEST
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yes a true love is hard to find and priceless. We need more love in our world right now. This is great!!
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Re: Our Love
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by Spike on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 05:32:08 AM AEST
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A very genuine and honest dedication poem - not too sucky at all. Check your spelling before you post - misspelling is always a distraction.
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Re: Our Love
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by rockstarr12747 on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 07:39:43 PM AEST
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i dont think this sucked i think its great an true cause true love as yours sticks through thick and thin good work
~crystal~ |
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Re: Our Love
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by Saloni on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 04:35:22 AM AEST
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| god bless u.. i felt that once.. buts its gone! :( |
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