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A Perfected Reflection
Contributed by
sride686
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Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 07:23:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A perfected reflection that’s fare from true
A gloom in a loom that hangs from the screws
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Now Invisible threads that flow from the dread
From colors turned yellow a life that is mellow
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Fade it to black a life that’s off track
To hell is the voice that is heard
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For once it was blue but now it is thru
A life that is forever changed
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Gray is the sea and emotions it brings
Pain in a heart that wont fade
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Slip thru the cracks a life that’s off track
Now deeper insanity breaths
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Deep in my heart my life will depart
For blood that is red now fills me with dread
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Shadows so cold flow thru my soul
But they make me anew in my grave
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Reflection will fade as a life starts to change
For death is a gift my one final wish
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Take me away to my grave
~Steve~
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Re: A Perfected Reflection
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 08:36:21 PM AEST
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Steve,
I liked this write very much. New style is nice also. This flows nicely and tells a story along the way of true deep emotions.
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Re: A Perfected Reflection
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by RLWildPassions on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 07:46:40 PM AEST
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| Thank you for sharing, nice to see your writing again, have missed you and your family. Let me know how you are doing? RaquelLeah DuPont.... |
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