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Relax
Contributed by
InfamousG
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Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Come home, silence, there's note on the door
Tonight’s your night, kids asleep, relax mi amour
Door opens, first sight, rose petals line the floor
Follow the trail, anticipation, which leads to more
Candles light the bathroom, mmmm, it's all for you
Your song plays softly, simply 'cause, "J' amour vous"
Remove your clothes, relaxing bath, room for two
Ease your tension, back massage, "it's your day boo"
"Beautiful", kissing your neck, chills down your spine
We're so close, I feel your breath, so glad your mine
Caressing your body, holding you close, love so divine
We head to the room, "I Love You", your smile shines
Skip the wine, are faire l'amour, as we join together
Passionate kisses, intense moment, should last forever
Body begins to shiver, sexual peak, of this love endeavor
I hold you close, look into your eyes, "Will leave you never"
Copyright ©
InfamousG
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2003-02-10 23:00:00]
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Re: Relax
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 11:11:21 PM AEST
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| AWW!! I think you have a piece of every woman's heart who reads this!! Ahhh...lovely:) |
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Re: Relax
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by tier on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 11:32:03 PM AEST
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| i wish i could find some one taht could love me like that but all in all it was a bueatiful poem...thank you for sharing....... |
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Re: Relax
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 02:11:38 AM AEST
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| It is a beautiful poem but it runs swiftly and leaves nothing to the memory.. venkat |
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Re: Relax
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by InfamousG on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 12:31:27 PM AEST
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| Could you imphasize on the memory part, I'd like to make it better or take that in mind for my next piece |
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Re: Relax
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by InfamousG on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 12:35:11 PM AEST
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| Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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Re: Relax
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by InfamousG on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 12:37:32 PM AEST
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| I'm glad you enjoyed it. There's always someone out there, but it the person you least expect. |
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Re: Relax
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 02:36:25 AM AEST
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| Mmmm, well from a woman's point of view, yum yum, I don't think I've ever known a man like this ... So where are they!!!!! Love this poem and the images it created, thanks. :)))) |
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Re: Relax
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by InfamousG on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 05:38:46 AM AEST
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| I'm glad you enjoyed it, keep searching there out there. If you can't find him show him the poem and begin training. Your definetly worth it. |
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Re: Relax
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 07:33:48 PM AEST
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Wow..lovely write... what a thing to come home to!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Relax
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by InfamousG on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 10:18:39 PM AEST
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| Thanks I'm glad you liked it. |
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