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Souls Adrift on land
Contributed by
RLWildPassions
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Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 07:04:17 PM in AEST
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Souls adrift on land
Aimlessly traveling
You have no care
You hate and fear
You are deceitful
You bring harm
You undermine values
Who do you not like?
You do not know your boundaries
You do not know your limits
Suddenly something unexplained?
Questions?
Your answer is down the street from yours
So what are you fostering?
Certainly not care and adoration
You try to suppress yourselves
Your explosions lead left, then right
Those active prisms of light
You cannot filter out
You wonder
You think
Your voices tremble
Your smirking smiles
Shows surreal sums of pain?
Real!
You allow yourselves
To be just a definition,
A term?
You lead yourselves
To confusion
Why try to guess
Who or what you are
Your varied meaning---s
Cause you misunderstanding
Do not assume those meaning---s
You have been taught---
That form and style you think you are
Is that what you want to accept?
Utterly confused one
You have misunderstood
You have placed yourself in danger
Trust? Entrust?
Where is your confidence?
Do you know, or did you forget
Who delivers peace?
You’ve rejected love
Love you have rejected
You inhaled the scent of life
Then exhaled the scent of death
Now you are left without power!
You have no comfort!
You’re traveling with temptation
No, you do not want peace
Yet you want safety?
Do you know who separates bullies?
From those who obey the truth
Souls adrift on land
Extremely negative souls
Your habits of mind is known:
What you preach
What your methods of actions are
What you worship
Who you worship
You want to place blame?
Well, look behind you
What does the past teach
You have not learned
You are blind drifters
You fit in nowhere!
The transference of your passion
Engulfs intense compassion
Your mind is brainwashed
Yes you have been mislead
It is you who has deceived yourselves
You are small
You are faithless
You are evil
You are meaningless
You devote all of your attention
On earth, and you have no place to go
Souls adrift on land
You are ill
You have strayed from truth
You have tensions
You exert your energies
In the opposite direction
You’re anxious
You’re hostile
Love is not a movement!
Love has not recently-
Come out of existence!
Where do you come from?
Whose offspring are you?
You say you want to be different
So you attack, you kill
Negative souls adrift on land
Why do you continue violence
You destroy your own temple
You follow nothingness
You are not dominant!
Your empire will be broken down
You will die out
You will linger in hell
While others who obey go on to live
Were you rooted in shallow water?
Your fear and hatred
Places you in danger
Your high intense attacks
Takes you nowhere
A strong commitment!
Refer a strong commitment-
To the likes of you
O’ soul adrift on land
You have not listened
What can you hear?
Those soft knuckles
Of rapping whispers
Cannot reflect-
On your hollow doors
That rests upon-
Your imaginary walls
Raquelleah DuPont
Thursday, July 28, 2006
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Re: Souls Adrift on land
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 08:47:18 PM AEST
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Such depth of emotion and passion within this write. Beneath the surface are so many truths. Our world has become a toilet bowl as far as Im concerned.
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Re: Souls Adrift on land
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by emystar on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 12:41:03 AM AEST
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I agree a very deep, powerfull write.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Souls Adrift on land
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by The_Unknown on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 02:54:03 AM AEST
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Harsh words, but most are true.
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Re: Souls Adrift on land
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 07:41:48 AM AEST
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Beautifully and carefully penned poem of reproof. I agreee with the last commenter that the words hold a veiled reproof that cuts harder and sharper than the open blunt reproof of passion against ultimate evil, openly and unequivocally declared.
As long as we ourselves, truthfully when expressing our views we are in the TRUTH.
And He is the Truth.
Thanks a lot for sharing wit us your truth as you perceive it. exquisitely penned. |
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Re: Souls Adrift on land
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by RLWildPassions on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 01:14:21 AM AEST
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| Thank You, just speak the truth; truth; far from hidden; oneself will eventually find it, with help of truth itself. RaquelLeah:D |
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