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Crippled
Contributed by
InfamousG
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Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm Blind, for you were my only light
Only darkness engulfs me, like endless night
I'm Deaf, for your voice was my utmost pleasure
Not once, since then, has there been greater treasure
I'm Weak, for you were my inner strength
It seems all my ambition and goals have gone away
I'm Lost, because I'm nothing without my boo
I never knew that, you were me and I had become you
I'm Hollow, for you were my heart and soul
Two souls, once one, until mine was stole
It's been three days now, and my pain only tripled
Ever since you've passed I can't help but feel crippled
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Re: Crippled
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 11:17:03 PM AEST
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| awww.. it is lovely... maybe she'll come back to your life..i do hope the 'passing' doesn't mean she died.. huggs nessa |
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Re: Crippled
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by Delusions on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 04:13:47 AM AEST
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oh this poem is awsome.... i can relate to it really well... its wonderfully written, keep it up
~Delusions~ |
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Re: Crippled
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by InfamousG on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 12:40:22 PM AEST
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| I'm glad you enjoyed it, I didn't lose the love in my life but I was writing as if I did. Actually a friend of mine lost his brother, which led me to this. |
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Re: Crippled
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by InfamousG on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 12:41:27 PM AEST
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| Thanks, I love to write and look forward to posting more. |
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