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The Ocean Soul
Contributed by
doug
on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 12:33:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The ocean has longed for me
she throws her arms upon the shore
searching , pleading a gentle roar -
Where's my tiny friend?
Ever loved and ever free -
she always was , will always be.
my cursing clock reminded me -
We're slaves to our design
I left today , nevermore
to march upon the souless streets
who mourn 'neath the lifeless feet
of suicidal hearts
I drift upon the sunny shore -
embracing now her searching arms
my heart leans into the warm
( : the warm ocean smile : )
Her soul washes over me
the sun washes over me
I am the ocean soul
I am timeless
Copyright ©
doug
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2006-07-28 12:33:44]
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Re: The Ocean Soul
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 01:18:17 PM AEST
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that is such a beautiful poem, doug.
keep it up.
luvs ya
jess |
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Re: The Ocean Soul
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 01:28:31 PM AEST
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Doug this is lovely to say the least. The lastline completed this wonderful write I am timeless! Love it
Michelle |
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Re: The Ocean Soul
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by True on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 02:09:53 PM AEST
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| Excellent as always. I personally have little love for the ocean but I can understand people's fascinatin with it. |
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Re: The Ocean Soul
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 06:30:38 PM AEST
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Doug~
A most beautiful and excellent penned poem. I love the ocean it has a calming effect on my soul. I absolutely loved the last verse. A superb write. Thanks so much for posting it.
warm hugs,
sue m |
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Re: The Ocean Soul
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by Spike on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 06:30:09 AM AEST
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A very hypnotic, existential poem, this one. I share your yearning for this kind of peace and rhythm.
Spike |
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Re: The Ocean Soul
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 07:42:39 PM AEST
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I have to admit, the title is what drew me here ..
an ageless piece doug. So ethereal and serene.
I adore the second stanza ..
soft and graceful flow of words. Wonderful thoughts ..
~Breezy |
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Re: The Ocean Soul
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 10:43:25 PM AEST
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I, like the "breeze", was drawn by the title-
and found a work forged by way of
every subtle fantasy I've ever known and loved-
..the 3rd stanza is magnificent doug~
"I left today , nevermore
to march upon the souless streets
who mourn 'neath the lifeless feet
of suicidal hearts"
I don't often quote works.. but this passage is at the very least, worthy of a literal rendition!
It's great!! (and the work entirely~)
Truly..
B |
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Re: The Ocean Soul
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by Voyager on
Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 04:55:26 AM AEST
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| Simply beautiful! Had a mystical feel to it and uplifting in a way. |
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