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Asthmatic
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 10:44:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I’m choked by your evanescent presence
Your stench over powering my senses
Your eyes are spears penetrating my own
Your numbing touch suffocating my skin
I feel your breath gliding along my neck
Your presence rotting deep inside my lungs
Your fingers slowly trail along my spine
It’s midnight; I’m lost inside your cold gaze
You reappeared inside my diary
You reappeared so sadistically
Your spiders crawl so deep inside my head
My thoughts, torn fragments of burning paper
Breathing in the embers of the said blaze
As I choke on the ashes of my past
The tears from my eyes explode on the ground
Fragmented into mercury pieces
Running down the drain deep inside my heart
I’m entangled in your web of deceit
Your kisses, your lies, your fading lipstick
Imprints subterranean in my mind
Catch the breath from within my trepid lungs
As they beckon to your every caprice
I feel your soft skin brush against my hands
I feel the iceberg melt inside my heart
I give myself to my stolen memory
Of your soft delicate eyes
Beckoning me in the wind
Taking me by my hand
To an vague place
Inside your blue eyes
I find a disguise
My Lungs Stop
Asthmatic.
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2006-07-28 10:44:05]
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Re: Asthmatic
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 01:31:18 PM AEST
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This is incredible! Nothing I say would do this justice . I got so caught up within this write! Flow and power everything about it, vivid detail and images, great job
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Re: Asthmatic
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 03:30:41 PM AEST
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this is a great write.
luvs ya
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Re: Asthmatic
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by DarkFaerie on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 03:27:28 AM AEST
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| amazing flow with your imagery. fantastic :D |
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