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The Perfect Wedding
Contributed by
Wilder
on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 05:53:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The sky was clouded
The flowers were late
The wedding car crashed
Could this be fate?
The venue was full
The seating plan lost
The bridesmaids were fitted
At some extra cost
The suits didn't match
The ties didn't show
The DJ was pricey
So he had to go
Mum she was worried
Dad was irate
People were thinking
You were just tempting fate
But did it all matter
They should see it your way
You got what you wanted
A perfect wedding day
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Wilder
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2006-07-28 05:53:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Perfect Wedding
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 06:42:21 AM AEST (User
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Ain't it the way! it's not a wedding without a few hiccups, and you captured the stress and angst and happy ending well.
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