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Contradicting Love
Contributed by
kie-kie
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Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 04:37:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I wish I knew just what to say
I wish I knew just what to do
I'm all alone in this now
And now's when I need you
I know that I'm not perfect
I know I'm only human
It's all I ever claimed to be
If anyone can vouch, you can
I never bought your lines
I never thought them right
You never made me believe
And you left without a fight
I made everything worse
I made you say goodbye
All because for just one night
I had to break down and cry
But baby can you blame me?
Baby I thought you cared
You left me right when I needed you
I'm feeling more than scared
I thought we could just be friends
I thought that this would work
You weren't supposed to be like the rest
Not just another jerk
Why is it that you lied to me?
Why did you pretend?
You made me think that you were better
But it was all an act in the end
I hurt more now that you are gone
I hurt more than I should
I'm supposed to feel relieved
I always thought I would
You caused more pain than anyone
You caused me to doubt
You had me believing
That love would never come about
I'm sure you were trying to help
I'm sure that was your goal
Yet now that it's all said and done
I'm still in an emotional hole
I should be thankful that you left
I should like I can fly
But you just had to say those words
And prolong our goodbye
I want to be able to hate you
I want to believe you're bad
I should have never listened
These effects I wouldn't have had
So thank you for confusing me
Thank you for this mess
If you had just let me think you were evil
I wouldn't be under this stress
I still think it's ironic
I still am amazed
That this is what you helped me through
Everytime I caved
So isn't it just fantastic
Isn't it just so funny
That the very thing I need you for
Is what you used to hurt me
I trusted you to love me
I trusted you with my heart
I thought you would protect me
Instead of tearing me apart
Copyright ©
kie-kie
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2006-07-28 04:37:45]
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Re: Contradicting Love
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by Wilder on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 06:00:25 AM AEST
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| Beautiful. The only minor flaw is, I probably wouldn't have used the word "jerk" as it sounds harsh against the rest of the poem, but other than that - perfect! :D |
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Re: Contradicting Love
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 06:23:01 AM AEST
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If this poem is an expression of your feeling I think you need more time to get over it. You certainly spilt your guts in this one. If this is made up,l you certainly know how to get in touch with the part of you that hurts.
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Re: Contradicting Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 09:09:25 AM AEST
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well,
I can certainly feel the emotion in this one. The hurt, the anger, the sarcastic thoughts are very well portrayed in your poem. I liked it! |
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Re: Contradicting Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 08:09:58 AM AEST
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Hugs Kie kie...
Very, very emotional piece. You have expressed your pain very well. It echos and magnifies my own....great emotional poet! |
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Re: Contradicting Love
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 04:52:25 PM AEST
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even in your pain you write beauty.....
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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