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come to you
Contributed by
chaos78
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Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 11:25:26 PM in AEST
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I come to you
broken and weak
you give me words
that put me
back on my feet
I come to you
confuse you tell me
not everyone understands
the things you do
I come to you
with so many question
you tell me not every
question needs an answer
I come to you
with a pain that aches my heart
you tell me
I’m not the first who watch
they life fall apart
I bow before you
to hide my face
for this scar shows my disgrace
you tell me to stand up
it’s not your time to be judge
now go back
and turn your life around
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2006-07-27 23:25:26]
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Re: come to you
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 11:50:48 PM AEST
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Great writing.
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: come to you
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by kttykttywfreckls on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 01:51:21 AM AEST
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| good job....... : ) |
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Re: come to you
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 10:17:26 AM AEST
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It's good to have some one to pick you up
It's good to have someone to reflect you back on track. |
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Re: come to you
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 03:15:29 PM AEST
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I love the iorny in the ending verse. I like your neat and stylish presentation. what a lovely poem this was, smooth and interesitng.Nice.
Ben |
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