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My Garden
Contributed by
azn_poet811
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Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I have a garden filled with roses
where no wicked things could grow,
That though no ever plant the roses
but still the lovely roses grow,
Within my garden there is a stream
filled with broken shards of hope,
That draws the lovers to my stream
that hand in hand the lovers hope,
Within my garden there is a spot
where the fairest of my roses bloom,
And I have saved for you this spot
hoping you will my roses when they bloom...
I have a garden with misty roses
that I had meant to show to you,
I'm sorry for the wilted roses
but my garden's lost, waiting for you...
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Re: My Garden
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:52:50 PM AEST
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| awww this is lovely.................. |
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Re: My Garden
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 03:12:11 AM AEST
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| It is brief and beautiful.. venkat |
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Re: My Garden
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by azn_poet811 on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 04:18:13 PM AEST
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This azn...I apologize for the gramatical errors in this poem. So...here it is without the errors.
I have a garden filled with roses
where no wicked things could grow,
That though noone ever plant the roses
but still the lovely roses grow,
Within my garden there is a stream
filled with broken shards of hope,
That draws the lovers to my stream
that hand in hand the lovers hope,
Within my garden there is a spot
where the fairest of my roses bloom,
And I have saved for you this spot
hoping you will see my roses when they bloom...
I have a garden with misty roses
that I had meant to show to you,
I'm sorry for the wilted roses
but my garden's lost
waiting for you...
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Re: My Garden
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:19:33 PM AEST
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| fantastic. great twist. |
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