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Backstabber

Contributed by spike on Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 04:03:53 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry






Trust is such a precious store,
Like friendships sprung from common ground
Lovers ask for even more,
In you I thought that’s what I’d found
I hoped that you would watch my back,
As I likewise, watched over yours
Instead you levelled an attack,
Payback in your secret wars.

You planned a complex retribution,
For all my many ‘hurtful’ ways
But settled on the wrong solution,
For treachery never really pays
You’re an opportunist, I get the gist,
And I was blind to all your schemes
But why the little extra twist,
The one that soured all my dreams?

I needed you to show compassion,
The thing that you most sorely lack
Your betrayal was an object lesson,
Another knife into my back
I can bear the pain, its nothing new,
Human hearts are weapon-bent
I just never thought it would be you,
The one who seemed so innocent.

Your actions hurt me to the core,
Stole confidence and friendships too
But brought reprisal to the fore,
Karma that will rain on you
Revenge is best when dished up cold,
Biding time before the attack
Yours will come in it’s sweet time,
Until then, traitor, watch your back.




Copyright © spike ... [ 2006-07-27 04:03:53]
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Re: Backstabber (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 04:34:23 AM AEST
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It is painful when someone betrays you, but anger makes you fight back I know how it feels... Great poem.. xxx


Re: Backstabber (User Rating: 1 )
by seci on Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 02:57:35 PM AEST
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i can relate to this so much because believe it or not , i had dealt with this at my job. it hurt me so bad. not in a million years i ever thought that this would ever happen to me. but i learned that not ever body is your friend because they smile in your face. no one is always meant to like you. i like this poem. and yes you are right, rain will come down on them.


Re: Backstabber (User Rating: 1 )
by seci on Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 02:58:00 PM AEST
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i can relate to this so much because believe it or not , i had dealt with this at my job. it hurt me so bad. not in a million years i ever thought that this would ever happen to me. but i learned that not ever body is your friend because they smile in your face. no one is always meant to like you. i like this poem. and yes you are right, rain will come down on them.


Re: Backstabber (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 07:28:17 PM AEST
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Wow, powerful. Reminds me so damn much of my second marriage / second divorce. Wish I could have written her something like this. May I borrow it? ;-) j/k

Awesome poem. Thank you for sharing it.

Tim


Re: Backstabber (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Wingz on Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 08:05:29 PM AEST
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I know this all too well. I very much believe in Karma and the person who betrayed me got theirs ten fold. This is such an amazing write with the feelings so raw and pure. Thank you for sharing this and yes they will get theirs.

Krystal


Re: Backstabber (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 08:12:23 PM AEST
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Hey Spike~
Don't ya just absolutely hate that when you have a friend(who is supposedly ur friend) be nice to u in ur face and then behind ur back they b**** about ya. I believe what goes around comes around . Every dog has their day and this ex friend of yours will pay big time for what they've done to u.
So sorry this happenned to ur my dear friend.
Obviously they weren't really a friend to u in the first place. Take care dearest Spike~
love n hugs from ur fan/friend,
suzie Q


Re: Backstabber (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_in_waiting on Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 07:53:44 AM AEST
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I promise NEVER to betray you!!!

Very good write .. excellent flow and rhythm,

cheers
sean


Re: Backstabber (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 09:25:19 AM AEST
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revenge is sweet
to bad it comes to that
pity
to those who cross you.


Re: Backstabber (User Rating: 1 )
by starry_night on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 03:30:03 AM AEST
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Great poetry ... rhyme, metre, and flow ... the topic, have to admit I related to, but then most everyone would ... excellent write ... Jan


Re: Backstabber (User Rating: 1 )
by twbanter on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 08:01:58 AM AEST
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Were you writting about me? I hope not... Lol You know there are two sides to every story; You expressed your side extremely well. nice job Jan! Can't wait for the defence...

Tom W


Re: Backstabber (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 05:13:39 PM AEST
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yes, karma is a boomerang. great writing, awesome poem, spike!




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