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I Survive
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 02:20:05 AM in AEST
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I don't believe in miracles,
Or even fairy tales,
Story books don't interest me,
And at love I often fail,
But I can write a rhyme or two,
About love or even hope,
Can even write of distress,
And what its like to cope,
I dream of life, a better one,
Where I don't feel out of place,
Where fear of failure is no more,
And I have a smile upon my face,
I count my blessings one by one,
There aren't many, only a few,
Buts that is enough to encourage me ,
When I am lost and blue,
I choose my friends wisely,
For I know whom I can trust,
The ones who are in tune with me,
And are fair and never unjust,
So in conclusion, I decree,
I manage to survive,
And one last note , and I quote,
I am happy to be alive.
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jerseysue
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Re: I Survive
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 02:23:58 AM AEST
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Yes i am happy your alive too.
An awsome write
well done
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 02:46:05 AM AEST
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I too am happy u r alive but I do believe in miracles as I'm a walking miracle. I've seen death many times but the will to live and my faith brought me back each time.
U certainly are a good writer.
luv, huggs,
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Re: I Survive
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 02:46:06 AM AEST
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I too am happy u r alive but I do believe in miracles as I'm a walking miracle. I've seen death many times but the will to live and my faith brought me back each time.
U certainly are a good writer.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: I Survive
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 04:38:20 AM AEST
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| Really inspirational, beautiful poem xxx |
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Re: I Survive
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Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 12:48:01 PM AEST
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Ohhh, I can relate to this entire piece ---- well... with the exception of that first stanza (I am absolutely unwilling to let go my belief that fairy tale endings and miracles are possible *wink*).
Like other writes of yours, I think this could easily have been posted in the 'inspirational' category. It is, again, wonderfully positive. I adore your perspective and think, frankly, it will serve you well. I truly, truly believe hope, faith and positivity are the means by which dreams are born and realized. We all have our blue moments (it is only reasonable that we do, necessary even I'd say) - oh, but they should not let us lose sight of how blessed we are.
Ah, life! What a glorious journey it is! I was just rambling a bit in an email last night about how beautiful life is... it's not always easy, of course... but it is, I'm convinced, always beautiful. : )
Keep writing -
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Re: I Survive
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by candysears on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 02:31:01 PM AEST
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Very nice write...Very good indeed...
God Bless!
Glad you are on the side of the land of the living... |
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Re: I Survive
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 07:22:51 PM AEST
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Sue~
my dear friend such inspiring words to lift the lowest of spirits and brighten up ones day. You send your message across in superb poetic verse and I have to say you do a great job with it too~ We should all count our blessings my dear friend. A very well written and expressed piece of poetry. Well done Sue~
warm hugs & *smiles*
suzie Q |
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Re: I Survive
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by twick on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 01:25:18 AM AEST
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| I believe you would be a great children's writer not only because of the beautiful sing songy quality in all of your poems but also because you have an underlying note of hope and courage. I feel you are most comfortable in this scope because it is what you live and breathe as it comes through your writing. That would be key to children's writing as well because they can feel what's real and know what's real faster than anything. Your words are genuine and I think you should stick with it. It is obvious you have a knack for it. |
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by Spike on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 06:58:00 AM AEST
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Sue, there are plenty of lessons in this post for me as well. Thank you.
Spike |
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Re: I Survive
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 01:13:23 PM AEST
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I know I've said it before but it's true; you have a wonderful flow thing going on with your poems.
I too am glad you are alive and here to share inspirational poems like this. I'd have to say though, that I do think miracles exist. At least I hope so and I think I have personally witnessed at least one.
Take care and thanks for sharing this one.
Tim
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