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What are you trying to tell me?
Contributed by
bhav
on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You are small in stature,
But you are not small in your ideals.
You have a beautiful round face,
Just like the full moon,
I feel like I should keep looking at you from morning to noon.
What can I tell about your beautiful long hair?
The only thing I can say God has made you with a lot of care.
That smile,
Amazing isn’t it,
It’s just beautiful and on your face it’s a perfect fit.
You aren’t a person, who speaks much,
So whenever I meet you, I just have one question to ask
Hey! Girl with those beautiful eyes,
What are you trying to tell me?
Behind the God given gifts you are a person who loves playing hide and seek with anyone who try’s to get too close to you,
Behind those deep brown eyes there is so much pain, which is felt, but not expressed by you.
There are times when someone is talking with you,
You suddenly lose sight of that person and start moving in your own thoughts,
At times when one talks with you one feels that you are there but yet you are not there,
You are just lost in your own thoughts.
Won’t you ever share what you feel with someone?
Isn’t there someone whom you can point your finger at and say he is the one?
Hey! Girl with those beautiful eyes,
What are you trying to tell me?
I can’t say I know you well,
But if I say so, you will make me jump in a well.
I don’t know whether I will ever be able to understand you as a friend,
But given the person I am, remember me when you feel you need a friend.
I know I can’t walk all the way with you my friend,
But as long as my feet support me
I will walk with you my friend.
I have said quiet a few things, and left quiet a few unsaid.
Remember in life’s journey when walking alone becomes difficult,
Then just turn back ,
you will find me there if I am alive
And if God calls me up early then I will always be there with you mentally and spiritually.
That’s it then, my friend.
So before I end,
Hey! Girl with those beautiful eyes,
What are you trying to tell me?
Copyright ©
bhav
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2003-02-10 20:20:00]
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Re: What are you trying to tell me?
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by karoody on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 11:17:14 PM AEST
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| Very sad...Hope you can get through to her. Good luck. |
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Re: What are you trying to tell me?
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 02:53:05 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written ..venkat |
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Re: What are you trying to tell me?
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by bhav on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 11:10:36 AM AEST
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| Hi! There, Karoody. Firstly thanks for reading my poem .To tell you the truth I have lost her (not literally) tried my level best but failed miserably. Anyways thanks for your best wishes . |
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Re: What are you trying to tell me?
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by bhav on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 11:11:46 AM AEST
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Hi! There Venkat.I know that you are reading my poems regularly as you had promised in your last comment to my poem. Thanks once again for liking it.
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