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Diane of the Mourning Vale
Contributed by
doug
on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 05:31:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Diane... Diane...
take me not to this mourning-
to the trees and the winds
of this mourning Diane
This vale... this vale...
show me not to this vale-
hold me not to this vow
that I gave you Diane
My hands... my hands...
with these mountains be damned-
for the loss of the love
and the smile of Diane
I beg... I beg...
of the ghostly who stand-
please haunt not and hold not
to my gravestone Diane
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doug
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2006-07-26 17:31:14]
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Re: Diane of the Mourning Vale
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 05:34:50 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed this, the third stanza especially caught my eye. its unique, its great and kinda creepy. always great elements to have, dontcha think?lol
keep up the great work |
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Re: Diane of the Mourning Vale
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by True on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 06:08:26 PM AEST
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| Seems our poetry is along the same lines today. Excellent poem, Poe was kind of a creepy writer but everyone loved him (after his death of course because no good artist is famous while alive, lol). |
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Re: Diane of the Mourning Vale
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by richcol7522 on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 10:29:12 PM AEST
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I'll have to read it again but I liked it alot. Very good job. Poe is one of my favorite too. Keep upi the good work.
Rich |
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