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Sunflowers & Vivid Skies
Contributed by
holstein
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Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 03:38:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Reminiscing over fears, I’ve buried through the years
And still I find myself trapped and wrapped
in time standing still
With but my visions and fading will,
I swore I would live above the world
But lately I’ve seen myself slip in,
Secluded in this earth-like hell
I await a life that will never arrive - I dwell,
Back then I fell through - now I fall unto - the ground in pain
Strained and despondent - I lie in bed - weeping myself to sleep
With sunflowers, vivid skies & her on my mind
Oh sunflowers & vivid skies
And her on my mind
Oh vast universes in disguise
And love on the rise
And still I find it hard to articulate my fears
When I’m around my peers
But with a bottle of wine
And her dazzling face on my mind
everything’s fine
And for a second of time
All my ineptness and sorrow is only words put in rhyme
Back then I fell through - now I fall unto - the ground in pain
Strained and despondent - I lie in bed - weeping myself to sleep
With sunflowers, vivid skies & her on my mind
Oh sunflowers & vivid skies
And her on my mind
Oh vast universes in disguise
And love on the rise
The world’s unkind - but I’ll never resign!
Copyright ©
holstein
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2006-07-26 15:38:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sunflowers & Vivid Skies
(User Rating: 1 ) by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 04:08:31 PM AEST (User
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i think its a wonderful poem/song. i love how the rhyming flows naturaly! good job |
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Re: Sunflowers & Vivid Skies
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ruby2sdy on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 05:23:44 PM AEST (User
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the flow comes from the simple rhyming, i liked this, wish i could hear the music you had in mind, for some reason, my head decided to play it to kelly clarkson... not sure that was the desired effect! lol! nice write, i enjoyed it,
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Re: Sunflowers & Vivid Skies
(User Rating: 1 ) by holstein on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 05:58:45 PM AEST (User
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Kelly Clarkson!!! haha..you had me cracked up there, no offence:) |
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Re: Sunflowers & Vivid Skies
(User Rating: 1 ) by holstein on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 02:06:44 PM AEST (User
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what does one have to do in here to recieve comments? Lol...
Anyway, if made into a song, i would say that it would be in the style of Jeff Buckley or Leonard Cohen, perhaps even Sarah Mclachlan.
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