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Someday, You'll See
Contributed by
ko_ko_92
on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 04:35:28 PM in AEST
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I am walking
Even though people say, I'll fall
I hold my head up high
Optimistic, through it all
I wear a smile as bright
As the sun on a sunny day
I march past all the hatred
I'm sure I'll find my way
I'm destined for greatness
I'll be someone really big
Then when I hit 60
I'll tell my grandkids all I did
I'll tell them about the hardships
I'll warn them about the evils
I know my life will be special
I know what I can be
One day youll realize it too
Someday, you'll see
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ko_ko_92
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Re: Someday, You'll See
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by luckycharm on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 04:42:42 PM AEST
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| This poem has really uplift my spirt because I am kind of down right now and what you said in your poem is true. Thanks 4 sharing this great poem. I hope to see more of your work and god bless you!.-luckycharm |
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Re: Someday, You'll See
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by kttykttywfreckls on
Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 12:24:52 PM AEST
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| great job, I love it. It is so positive....... |
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Re: Someday, You'll See
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th October 2008 @ 06:49:00 PM AEST
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| This is a really nice poem. I hope you will write more like it! |
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Re: Someday, You'll See
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by HanaBoo on
Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 04:44:33 AM AEST
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| Very postitve. I liked it alot. Simple, yet very effective. Good Job. : ) |
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